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I look upon the darkness one last time
my life, my blood, draining slowly
The light flashes one more time
they change from white to red
I see no soul
I see no heart
only the grim reaper
in a new disguse
The storm is coming to an end
and sadly it has won
I look upon its countance one last time
I pray to the heavens for a swift death
but I know better
I will suffer
I have sinned to greatly
no one has forgiveness
not from the storm
I look into the red, souless eyes one last time
this is it.....
©2006-2010 ~LadyMage
:iconladymage:

Author's Comments

Yes, this is an mk themed poem, and I want you to guess who is doing the fatality (who is the narrator looking at knowing they are going to die)

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:iconspookypapa:
I will suffer
I have sinned to greatly
...sadly true. Still, I like it very much.

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Spooky is as spooky does.
:iconforlork:
Nice and subtle, but still gives you the imminant (sp?) feeling of uttre defeat and submission to death...something we all know will come *claps* Im favoriting
:iconspicy-wasabi:
the grim reaper maybe?....btw what does mk stand for?

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Touch me and I'll sue you. :hexentanz:
:iconladymage:
mortal kombat

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I am a happy, well adjusted, emotionally disturbed person
~rammsteinians

hey even I need a religion ;)

:iconlindik:

"I am Homer of the borg, prepare to be assmilated; ooooh doughnuts"
:iconspicy-wasabi:
Oh,I see.

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Touch me and I'll sue you. :hexentanz:
:iconcubbi:
*prods*
Wow, it's been a long time since you posted anything.
:iconladymage:
what no comments on the poem, and you have been slacking too so nya

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I am a happy, well adjusted, emotionally disturbed person
~rammsteinians

hey even I need a religion ;)

:iconlindik:

"I am Homer of the borg, prepare to be assmilated; ooooh doughnuts"
:iconmadmooninggnome:
Awesome!=D

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Don't feel ugly:bucktooth:...just think of yourself as an attractive monkey.:bucktooth:
:iconrockerbaby14:
I wonder how the grim reaper looks like in his new disguise?
I always thought he needed a new costume...
he is a good friend of mines and this is a stunning piece! :clap:

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Tag und Nacht wird sie bei dir sein,
Tag und Nacht wird sie bei dir sein...
[Die Polizei :police: ]

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